Time skip was a little easy to miss

Nicholas Hale July 4, 2016 6:11 pm

The first time I read this chapter I knew I missed something and I went back and noticed the time skip, but I feel like it wasn't portrayed as well as it could have. I still love this story and am ever so glad he finally remembered. I wish they'd define the time skip a little more clearly. To some people it might have been clear but for myself it was a little blurry.

Responses
    Deathperation-13 July 4, 2016 10:53 pm

    Its okie. I thought the same lol

    Keylime Pie July 10, 2016 7:27 pm

    It's subtle. Remember it's Spring when he hurt himself so when he left it was still spring, maybe early summer Then it's late fall, early winter. So he was gone for probably 4-6 months

    SugarySuga July 17, 2016 4:00 pm

    Yeah I agree, I was so lost because they looked different and they acted like they haven't seen each other in awhile