The whole story feels rushed

xthemainhoex June 6, 2021 8:26 pm

The entire thing has so many substories that would make the main story much more understandable if it were expanded. Like the 2nd ml story, or even how the ml and fl even met. Like the past is too vague. Even the reason theyre divorced is not discussed and the fact that theyve moved on and started a relationship again... I feel like they shouldve atleast discussed that. For sure this gets to be explained later on but at least give us something to work on.

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    xthemainhoex June 6, 2021 8:28 pm

    Also the names. They keep throwing out names left and right, i cant keep up with who's who esp. during the 2nd ml's backstory or smt