DONT HATE ME

JMB June 4, 2021 12:19 pm

i absolutely loved the concept of this story. like dragon, pearl, reincarnation, cool. The omegaverse came as a surprise but hey I have nothing against it. The pacing of the story was just really weird for me. Like Yeon went from being annoyed by Moon to being head over heels for him in literally like a chapter and a half, after about 20 chapters of him seeing the guy as a nuisance. And the two villains of the story were overall forgettable and seemingly came out of nowhere then disappeared into nowhere. I think this story definitely would have benefitted if they didnt spend so long on the "we're complete strangers" part and spent a bit more time on flashbacks and them slowly falling in love again. Didn't like the drama in their present lives at all and I feel like there could've been enough angst with the reincarnation plotline alone.

there were a lot of things that i liked though. The artstyle, for one, was fucking amazing. I'm still on the fence about how I feel about omegaverse in this story but I liked how they included ruts (most omegaverse rarely do), and I really liked the final few chapters with the kids. Plus that thing with their unborn child was a nice addition.

Responses
    Jessie June 4, 2021 1:18 pm

    You said everything I wanted to say but better lol

    Effa June 5, 2021 12:01 am

    I second this