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Totally agree ,u r dropping at ch6 but I'm already dropped at Ch2 idk how story will continue when FL is like toxic fan girl
Hi I haven’t read it jus reading the comments to see if this is good but after reading this i dont think I’ll read it so thanks for sharing lol,, also I love comments like this because I’m the type that likes to discuss the pros and cons of a story and not jus fangirl and I hate when people are open to criticism
Before i start, yes i know this is just a story and that i’m reading this from an illegal site. I can complain and criticize the story all i want.
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It makes me uncomfortable and disgusted how the fl is crushing on the ml. She looked like a teenager/adult before transmigrating into a childs body and the first thing she does is try to win the ml over—who is 12 btw.
Shes toxic and borderline obsessed with him; she admittedly tried to stalk him while succeeding in the end.
She likes to manipulate people around her for her benefit. (ex: Pretending to be scared of the count in hopes he thanks her for standing up for him, trying to cry before apologizing to gain pity from him.)
She already assumed they made up simply because she apologized.
He is clearly uncomfortable around her and probably gained ptsd because of the original fl. The current fl likes to say she understands where his attitude is coming from yet gets frustrated at him bc of the same reasons. The boy has been abused by her and he clearly show signs of discomfort whenever shes near. She needs to stop forcing herself into his life and fix her reputation before even approaching him. The fl doesn’t even have a personality other than liking him and being stubborn. Other than the shitty fl, the story is predictable with no originality which is okayish i guess. People like cliches. But no matter how much character development she gets (if she gets it) in future chapters, i’m never picking this up again.
Yikes/10