wow.... i think it's a good story.....
i'm looking forward the continue ヾ(☆▽☆)
Thank you!
I'm really happy to hear this!
Even thought I'm newbie I hope that one day I'll be able to publish it.
I know it's stupid, but why not to give it a try
you're welcome(๑•ㅂ•)و✧
that's true! i'll give you a support!! (๑•ㅂ•)و✧
so, give your best at it ヾ(☆▽☆)
Thank you.
I'm really really happy!
I'm glad that there is someone who likes it.
I'll do my best!
ganbatte~ (≧∀≦)
So here is what came to my mind.
It's one of Elizabeth's dreams.I'm sorry I couldn't write it till now.Gomenasai!
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She was still young.Long brown hair.Little young girl who wears blue dress.
This innocent little girl founds herself in a strange big room.A dark room.The once thing she can see in front of her is a person dressed in robe.
She grew up.
Now she sees the details of the person's robe.
It's black like the room.On the edges there are strange symbols in golden color.The hood of the robe hides person's face.
He is coming closer to a table for sacrifices.From marble,whit Greek ornaments,its white color contrasts whit the place itself.
The white center of the dark room.
Its calm color as if attracts the woman to come closer.As if the atmosphere...as if the feeling inside of her was pulling her there.
Her gaze became dizzy.
She was stepping slowly.
The person was whispering "Come closer.Closer.Closer"
In front of the table she stopped.She was nailed in her place.
She was again in consciousness.Too late.
The person slowly take out a small pot.He emptied its content.
A blood.It started to spill out of the table.
Somehow she could step some steps backward.For some reason she was afraid
Somehow the blood started to surround her,forming a circle.It was getting smaller and smaller.The color of the blood started to become darker and darker.It stopped.
Suddenly the blood turned into black spikes which was aiming in Elizabeth.
-NO!.
She screamed and her echo reverberated in the space.
Instinctively she has put hand in order to defend her and closed her eyes.
In the moment she screamed the spikes freezed.
Then she slowly opened her eyes.
The bloody spikes has changed their color in blue.Like icicles,freezed,forming a trap for their victim.
It was so cold that Elizabeth could see her breath.She was freezing.Elizabeth slowly stretch forward her hand.She touched one of the spikes with her finger.
Everything started felling apart and she failed in the endless abyss
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Again I'm sorry for writing this so late.
Also forgive me,for writing in separate comments,but it's uncomfortable.On my lap top,if I write something very long in this website,the page starts moving up and down whit each pressing of the buttons
I'm looking forward for the continuation
this is interesting ヾ(☆▽☆)
Really?
Do you think so?
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it's fine....
that's really interesting
ヾ(☆▽☆)
Hi guys!
I need help!
I've been thinking in the summer holiday to create a book and manga.{The manga has it's first chapter,but it's not drawn yet(my friend-artist is lazy) }
So...about the book:
It's about a wife and husband who move in a small,dark and mysterious village.
"Although it's small size the in the village there's a mansion.It's deep in the forest,separated from the village.
It's built so long time ago,that even the citizens don't know when.A legend tells a story that the woman who has owned it gone mad and died under strange circumstances.She's been wakening up,screaming at Midnight.Her nightmares lasted for so long that she started to see the strange things out of her dreams. She couldn't endure it and one morning a citizen who's been hunting found her dead body.The sight has been horrific.Her eyes...the gaze...as if it forewarned what will happen to those who dare to cross the threshold of the mansion.
...
50 years later, Mrs Elizabeth Lotus and Mr John Wilson move in this mansion.
Lost their home,money and nowhere to go,they found out that 5 decades ago Elizabeth's ancestor had bequeathed a mansion.They hadn't another choice.
A new start.A chance for something better.How foolish!
Soon, after they moved in,the story begins again,even more more ruthless than the last time.
Page by page the horror entangles more and more.Nobody is spared.
This is for now!I'm too tired.
I'll post an event from the book tomorrow.I hope this captivated you!
I know that I shouldn't post this here,but I really do need help!
Please comment!I need ideas..