some constructive criticism

xiaoven May 30, 2021 6:59 am

this started of good and cute, the plot was unique and all but i feel it was written poorly, this story would have a lot of potential if they didn't go too fast and if the story was longer. still cute tho

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bertorto May 30, 2021 7:26 am

fr feels like reading a 150 words essay cause there are many questionable actions

Idknanmolla May 30, 2021 9:32 am

AGREED finally someone who didnt just oMg So cUtE WoRtH reAdInG this
Like it was actually written so poorly that it seemed a bit cringe
The plot is very good but if only sth was done w it also it's so rushed ughh
But ye still cute

bertorto May 30, 2021 9:56 am

since the person above said it's cringe, then i'm just gonna say what i *really* think while reading this.
THIS SHITS A COMIC VERSION OF WATTPAD

Idknanmolla May 30, 2021 10:03 am

since the person above said it's cringe, then i'm just gonna say what i *really* think while reading this. THIS SHITS A COMIC VERSION OF WATTPAD bertorto

OSBWKDBWKDJE LMAO TRUE

xiaoven May 31, 2021 4:34 am

i thought this was gonna be a good read honestly, love how it started and i already have high expectations,, the next turn of events r just not it (ŏ_ŏ)

Idknanmolla May 31, 2021 7:23 am

i thought this was gonna be a good read honestly, love how it started and i already have high expectations,, the next turn of events r just not it (ŏ_ŏ) xiaoven

Same tbh it started off good and the art is good but then

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