Hm

Bagel99 May 30, 2021 1:55 am

MC is kind of dumb. I get that he likes Jurgen and he's breaking up with him because he doesn't want to get him involved and because he's dangerously distracting, but agreeing to stay the week with him?? My dude, where did your logic go? How would that make the break up any easier, and make Jurgen less distracting?
Idk, I just don't think the MC is very smart. And it's a little hard to be convinced of his love for him when 90% of the interaction has been banging and he even states at the start they're not really "dating"

Also Jurgen 100% knows more than he's letting on and is probably involved in the industry, probably on the enemy side imo.

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    DrAdmirable May 30, 2021 3:20 am

    Well, I think that Jurgen has magic. I think he's a sorcerer and the grand master or whatever (the boss of the templar or the chechnyens). There was some sparkly blue stuff around Jurgen when he asked the MC to stay with him. I think there was sparkly stuff around him when they first met as well. Jurgen knows who the MC is and from what I can tell, he is manipulating him with magic and purposely chose to pursue the MC.

    Bagel99 June 3, 2021 2:08 am
    Well, I think that Jurgen has magic. I think he's a sorcerer and the grand master or whatever (the boss of the templar or the chechnyens). There was some sparkly blue stuff around Jurgen when he asked the MC to... DrAdmirable

    I genuinely hope this is what is happening, it would be a good twist, it would explain a lot, and make me like the mc again.