Had to taste the bitterness for myself

narutolvr June 15, 2016 9:59 am

Seeing all the negative comments, I just had to read at least 1 chapter (the last one) for myself. But, oddly enough, my complaint seems to be pretty different from everyone else's. Of course the story line was super bland and I could pretty much determine what had happened/would happen from the first half of chapter 9, I was way more put off by the art than the half-brained heroine.

Did the characters' faces feel off to anyone else? Little incidents like a character's hairline suddenly shifting and making he gave look awkward to oddly inhuman, out-of-place-in-a-shoujo expressions made me uncomfortable when looking at the characters lol. Granted, I'm no artist, but the inconsistency just made the work seem sloppy and the lackluster plot certainly didn't give me high hopes for this work or the author. All I have to say is, I hope this was an early work, because there is a ton of room for improvement!

Responses
    narutolvr June 15, 2016 10:06 am

    *making him or her look awkward...damn tablet typos ┑( ̄Д  ̄)┍

    FUJOSHI VirgoMonkey April 9, 2017 6:58 am

    I know what you mean. Every time you see the girl MC sideways, she always looks shocked, scared, or frightened. Her eyes are always so freaking wide sideways.
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