Lmao please stop trying to use insult as a scapegoat
You always used that whenever you get called out in an argument
And you're the one who don't know shit about character development
Didn't you try to justify rape and romanticised it oh and lets not forget about your creating a topic saying "i want to find a new rapist to defend"
Lmao you don't know shit about character development
And omg you're such a fuckin hypocrite your the one here running around saying people who don't like the story saying "they don't appreciate the authors work" and yet here you are saying the characters are ugly lmao
Stop tryna contradict yourself boo at this point you should try and look at yourself in the mirror and ask "whats this ugly mf doin with his life?"
Don't listen to that mf that guy is a hypocrite
He starts argument with other people and gets butthurt whenever they attacks him back
The amount of times I've called out this guy for being a hypocrite is fuckin insane
doesn't sound like me, The twink we're so over. sorry
with what you've got behind your fly, you couldn't make anyone's butt hurt, tinkerbell
no, dear. you see a scapegoat would have to be a person.
this is what I'm talking about. character development is a literary device, dummy, one that you won't understand until you learn to write. There is such a thing as writing classes. even for a dropout.
that looking in the mirror thing - get your own material. Don't steal other people's. It's a sure sign that you lack creativity
Well said. Thank you for this comment.
Put the rape aside this shit is the most realistic bl/yaoi ive ever read because it perfectly portrayed the flaws of people and their ignorance and also perfectly portrayed how hard it is to come out and how hard it is to think about your future with your same sex partner
By flaws i meant the semes mom who identified family as "something your comfortable with and thing you wanted to protect" and as "you can't be a family if you can't have a child" and the perfect thing the seme replied "you had me as a child but we never became a family right?" Or some shit like that i love it every piece of it and also
The rape was necessary to the story because the perspective of the seme with the rape was on point
How??
See the first break up was when they finally put an end to it and the seme was at fault because he was being an asshole and he also said the "we were dating?? I thought we were just relieving each others sexual fraustration" which made the uke despise him and go far away
When they broke up the seme realised all his mistake and wanted to change
Now that they got back together he thought he already change until the moment he realised that he was making a mistake again and its actually worse than the past mistake (the rape part) and when he snapped out of it he regretted his actions
The issue here is you never really know if you really changed for good until you realise that you're repeating your past again and making the same mistake, and its too late to revert it
People don't easily change
Thats all and thank you