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HAHAHAHAHAHAHA BRUHHH SAMEE!!
Hun the problem isn’t your English the problem is that the story doesn’t make sense at all#－.－)
Nope, the translation was the problem. The story itself was already too short thus underdeveloped, the bad translation made it empty,messy and meaningless.
I am really sorry because I'm grateful for the translation, but maybe because English isn't my first language, I didn't understand a single thing towards the end.