Nice draft. As someone said below, it would be a rather admirable work, if it was planned at least for 2 volumes
For the pace I think that was the idea originally, and for some reason they had to cut it down around ch 3 to only 5, because the last two has a really different pacing
Nice draft. As someone said below, it would be a rather admirable work, if it was planned at least for 2 volumes