Also I'm so happy you like the art.
HAHAH thank you!! If you think my art is nice then you'd really like my friends, their art is hundreds of times better than mine.
I accept UwU
But fr thank you! If you like my art then you'd really like some of my friends. I've only been drawing for four-five years so my art is still a work in progress. I'll find some of my friends art bc theirs is really beautiful.
it looks like you stole art. lol this whole thing sounds fake, and "your art" resembles zenovely127's. drawing for 4-5 years?? dont lie, no one can get that good in such an amount of time.
Some people are born talented, but if you don't mind, could you link zenovely127 mangago account.
Though the art may be similar, Mangaguy_23 has longer necks and softer jaws in their drawings, unlike zenovely127.
Thank you :)
I didn't notice this comment.. I follow that artist and drew in a similar style so I assume that's why it's familiar? I thought it was different enough now since I'm not up to date with their account anymore but maybe I should make my style more distinctive? I don't want that confusion. T.T
Hello, I'm thinking of creating a manga styled comic. The genres of this particular story is: Horror, Thriller, Crime, Psychological, Tragedy, Yaoi, and drama.
I have posted (well tried to let's see if they actually show up)- The character designs in my album. If you could give me feedback on this story and the art that'll be a huge help to me.
Story plot (rough idea):
It’s a story from the “ukes” perspective. The “ukes” name is Aoi and he’s an idol. He’s very innocent looking and is world wide famous. He’s known to be the angel of the group he’s in. He’s got a very outgoing and cheerful personality. No one knows about his backstory or where he came from, he got recruited when someone took a video of him singing in an underground subway tunnel. His video blew up because of his angelic voice and his beautiful appearance.
Unbenounced to everyone is that Aoi is a serial killer that takes pleasure in seeing people being disenchanted by him. Aoi has a messed up backstory, so he finds pleasure killing people who idolize him. I won’t get into the backstory bc there’s a lot to cover. The backstory doesn't excuse his actions, however it gives you a better understanding of the character. Aoi kills people of any age, gender, sexuality, race, etc.
Aoi has been killing people since he was 17 (he’s now 21). Aoi starts to find his way of killing to be boring so while he was browsing the web he "coincidentally" comes across a cult that summons demons. Not really believing it, but still wanting to try out the horrific sacrifice methods, Aoi decides to have some fun and go along with the cults "ridiculous summons". To Aois surprise those summons were actually legitimate. A demon (seme number 1) appears before Aoi with a deal that Aoi is to supply the demon with victims (aka his food) so that Aoi himself doesn't become food.
(This has changed. Aoi joins the cult, some things happen there that I won’t get into on this comment. The rest about the demon pretty much stayed the same it changed a little though.)
The demon and Aoi sign a contract that basically allows Aoi to get the help of the demon using his powers and in exchange giving the demon food. The contract ends when Aoi dies or cant keep up his end of the deal. if all goes well when Aoi dies he'll be judged by the demon lord and either gets to become a demon or goes back to earth. If Aoi is eaten by the demon his soul is stuck in never ending torture and nothingness. (I haven't really thought too much about the contracts details tbh)
Aoi keeps a steady number of people he kills but recently he starts to decrease the amount of people he’s killing which now throws the demons hunger off.
The demon warns Aoi that if he doesn’t start killing more people Aoi will be the next victim. Aoi starts committing more murders, but since he’s rushing them he starts to slip up. Aoi, the idol who’s never had a rumour or scandal, the idol everyone loves and adores, starts to be suspected for recent murders. Dun Dun Duuuunnn
I have a way that he’ll get out of it but his reputation gets ruined big time. That’s just the beginning of the plot, there's a lot more. The second seme I haven't given much thought yet, he'll be a mix of bad and good though. He's not on Aoi's side but he's also not against him.
I’m thinking this won’t have a happy ending, just that Aoi is literally the worst human ever. This story wont have rape because I hate that and its stressful to draw. Aoi is a power bottom, and this isn't a love triangle.
What I'm hoping to accomplish is making a suspenseful story that shows a character slowly going insane.
Please, please give me feedback. Ideas to add to the plot, constructive criticism, even if this story somewhat Interests you. Thank you for reading this. :)
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