I like it but

Ito May 21, 2021 6:21 pm

The art is just. It's really good in most places but other times it just bugs the hell out of me. The bow she was wearing around her neck during the ball looked ridiculous, as if it was a bow tied around a cat's neck. It was all up in her face all the time. And the blue dress Vienna wore had the weirdest pearl thing that looked like some stock clipart they slapped on. And the dialogue and flow of the story is a bit stilted and awkward idk

Responses
    Ami May 22, 2021 1:23 am

    FL hair looks out of place too