THE PLOT

honeycat May 21, 2021 5:52 pm

I really like the plot, it's really refreshing!
It's true that the intro is a cliche, but it's a really good cliche! It's well writen and make me curious for the ending! ( ◜‿◝ )♡

Responses
    Hyacinth May 26, 2021 11:49 pm

    Following for your feedback afterwards

    DawnNightingale May 26, 2021 11:59 pm
    Following for your feedback afterwards Hyacinth

    Lmaoooo same

    Hyacinth May 27, 2021 12:06 am
    Lmaoooo same DawnNightingale

    Have you just finished it too?

    DawnNightingale May 27, 2021 12:56 am
    Have you just finished it too? Hyacinth

    Yep! I got so frustrated midway and would come back to check every couple of chapters. :/

    DawnNightingale May 27, 2021 12:56 am
    Have you just finished it too? Hyacinth

    Yep! I got so frustrated midway and would come back to check every couple of chapters. :/

    Hyacinth May 27, 2021 1:16 am
    Yep! I got so frustrated midway and would come back to check every couple of chapters. :/ DawnNightingale

    Kk. I'm curious about the questioner's opinion :D Lets hope they read it soon ^^

    honeycat May 27, 2021 4:48 am
    Kk. I'm curious about the questioner's opinion :D Lets hope they read it soon ^^ Hyacinth

    Uh hi.. so yea I've read the last ep, is it an open ending? kinda disappointed for the ending because it seems like the author rushing the end, Evie should've feel a little betrayed/surprised by violet but she's just accept it, it's like she know that violet is the crown prince? Anyway it's still a cute story

    Hyacinth May 27, 2021 9:12 am
    Uh hi.. so yea I've read the last ep, is it an open ending? kinda disappointed for the ending because it seems like the author rushing the end, Evie should've feel a little betrayed/surprised by violet but she'... honeycat

    EXACTLY!!! thank you!
    Rushed and disappointing ://
    Like the author ran out of ideas or have given up on even finding ones.
    They just wanted to finish it...
    .
    As you said, that Evie just simply accepts everything is weird. And theres also how the author got rid of ALL the other candidates in a blink of an eye! Without any major conflict at that... It was simple as a children's tale: they are evil and and instantly caught on...

    Hyacinth May 27, 2021 9:13 am

    Are instantly caught on***