Responses
Yep....like there is a hole in the storyy...but im okay with the ending...i expect the climax should be very shocking and sad...but..yeah...im gonna say that its okay.....good job...
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Yep....like there is a hole in the storyy...but im okay with the ending...i expect the climax should be very shocking and sad...but..yeah...im gonna say that its okay.....good job...
But it feels like there are knots that were left unattended. Don't get me wrong, it's a great story but it just feels like there is more to it than it has rn. Like there is a potential to make the ending much more satisfying than it is right now. For example getting a proper closure for Lindsay's memory loss(?), her inability to bear a baby and also her childhood, AND EUTHIGEN!!! My boy needs a proper ending as well.