A few things to say...

Nishinoya.Yu May 19, 2021 6:31 pm

ok this wouldve been fine HAD NII-SAN NOT BEEN COMPLETELY OK WITH THEIR RELATIONSHIP FROM THE GET-GO, ALSO HES YOUR BROTHER??? AND YOU TRIED TO SCREW HIM?? why couldnt Nii-san be one of Shinobu's parents close friends or something. that literally couldve made it so much better. or like a next door neighbor/highschool student living alone because his parents are dead and then he takes Shinobu in because he related to him. no incest a t a l l then. also they didnt really explain the marriage at all. like we can gather that it was a marriage of convenience but how does that create the son? low key couldve been like "she was already preggo so they got married and decided to raise the kids together" boom instantly removed the blood ties between the two that actually f*ck and date n shit.

I AM NOT BY ANY MEANS SAYING THE AUTHOR "SHOULDVE WROTE THEIR STORY DIFFERENT" its fine the way it is and is it's own story. these are just a few possible ways it COULDVE gone. so dont get mad at me

Responses
    Nishinoya.Yu May 19, 2021 7:14 pm

    oh yeah, if anyone knows any similar "person takes in child when parents die to lovers" please give me names, i actually quite like this tripe

    Nishinoya.Yu May 19, 2021 7:15 pm
    oh yeah, if anyone knows any similar "person takes in child when parents die to lovers" please give me names, i actually quite like this tripe Nishinoya.Yu

    trope*