Loneliness and losing....always makes me cry

ErAw May 17, 2021 9:30 pm

This story feels just like (ironically)when you are under water and you lose the air you breath the safeness of a ground beneath you lose the world you belong to and get lost in the loneliness of no one and nothing but darkness,unknown places and more water searching for a way out maybe you get saved like chinami and gramps by the power of nostalgia and maybe you get stacked in a curse of a lost life while searching for a faraway God and not being able to detach your soul from a parent regret that even put another curse on you,cursed you so that you could to be able to see that loneliness and sense that losing,for you to be able to swim...

All and all it was a great story may all of us learn to bury some villages under water to bury our bitter sweet pasts somewhere peaceful somewhere to go back to just for a quick dive somewhere not so lonely and lost somewhere we can’t swim in :)

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