I understand your point. It feels like being stuck in a very croweded area where you keep hearing things without seeing it. It would be great to get out of her head a little and see more.
I couldn't keep up with stepmother's marchen either as the romance choices completely ruined it for me...
Same, i couldn't keep going with the stepmother's marchen too. And yeah, this story does lack a fish hook(￣∇￣") I'm here just to see her badass scenes though it's sad that i dont really understand what they're talking about
Exactly!! It feels like we're constantly stuck in her head.. to the point that it's actually a bit hard to follow what's happening outside of it lol
Hmm.. this didn't really manage to grab my attention like "A Stepmother's Märchen" did even though they hold a lot of similarities.. everything about this story feels hazy to me lmao, I don't know how to explain it; but it's like I'm not seing enough from the characters?? everything is just thoughts, like a lot of thoughts.. it's like I'm not getting to look at the characters properly or how they interact and everything is moving rapidly and the FL has a lot of monologues that quite frankly are kind of boring me. amazing art and a great idea for a plot but lacks that one thing that makes the reader hooked imo.