Thanks for your hard work. As for suggestions, the thing that stands out the most so far is the text: it's all ragged and needs to be rendered so it's smooth. In Photoshop this is text option called "Anti-Aliased." Also, I'd use a font that doesn't look like everything is italicized. I use Anime Ace which is similar to what you're using.
Otherwise, it looks okay.
The type looks much better in chapter 2, but you need help with hyphenations. Try this:
https://www.hyphenation24.com/word/hyphenation/
Hello this is the translator, type setter and uploader of this manhwa, this is my first time that's why my work is kinda sloppy but I am working on it. So can you guys please tell me where should I put more effort?
Feel free to advice