i just cant vibe with the art

tebbysweet May 16, 2021 1:59 pm

idk, something about the way it's drawn has thrown me off since chapter one and i just cant read it anymore. All the characters are drawn super sharp and harsh, and the ones that are supposed to be beautiful are just ugly to me. Her family, Tev, even Sylvia. And the way their teeth are drawn so sharply in every image, it always looks like they have fangs or something idk. The art is just... ugly to me. On top of that, I really just don't like the FL. I know I'm supposed to pity her past self and resent the ones who made her feel that way but tbh i just don't. The story just hasn't done enough to really flesh her out or her supposed tragic backstory. It TELLS me I should pity her, but doesn't really show me why. For all that "happened to her", she was a hundred times worse. The past Sylvia was literally just a whiny, vindictive little bitch. With a lot of FLs in the isekai trope, you get a FL who understands that their past shitty behavior was the reason for the shit that happened to them. Sylvia just blames everyone here except herself and takes no accountability for her awful personality, which honestly doesn't feel that different even with "new" Sylvia. Since she's still blaming everyone but herself, she still feels like the bratty Sylvia, and honestly she's just disgustingly rude to everyone for no reason. As far as her dad and brother are concerned, all they've known until now is the awful Sylvia, so why should they be expecting anything else?? She "went off" on her father the day after the old Sylvia broke her sisters arm?? Like girl shut the fuck up?? Sylvia was a nasty brat, how do they know you've suddenly taken over her body? Same with the brother like?? And I just... don't care that they were "mean" to past Sylvia and supposedly that's enough to explain her naturally shitty behavior - the old Sylvia was jealous and vindictive from the start, and her own nasty personality is what made her "ugly" and caused her to gain weight and act even worse. I just don't blame her environment. I think the original Sylvia was a vindictive little brat and, as the story hasn't actually SHOWN me a reason to pity her rather than just telling me I should, I'm going to keep that opinion. Honestly, it's just not my cup of tea and not my idea of a strong FL.

Responses
    Nick May 18, 2021 8:46 am

    You can't say that the art is ugly when no one's told you to critique their work. It's their art and you're not the one to judge someonelse hard work, since your reading it in an illegal site. If you don't like it, just drop it.

    tebbysweet May 18, 2021 9:37 am
    You can't say that the art is ugly when no one's told you to critique their work. It's their art and you're not the one to judge someonelse hard work, since your reading it in an illegal site. If you don't like... Nick

    I can say anything is ugly that I'd like to. It's simply called an opinion. This is my review of the story and of the art style. We leave comments so that other people can read them and decide for themselves whether to read a story, or to find other people who had the same thoughts as them. Not all of those thoughts will be positive. If you can't handle that, perhaps YOU should just leave the site. It's just one person's thoughts who read the story. If it bothers you that badly, you should probably get out more. You told me if I don't like it just drop it? Well if you don't like my comment then just scroll past it.

    Nick May 19, 2021 2:35 am

    Yeah i'm aware that's an opinion, but you're opinion is kinda offensive. You can state your opinion without saying offensive words such as an ugly art. Every artist has their own art style, and yeah i know that the art style isn't your style. You can just say that you're not into their art style, not the art is ugly, that's what you called art style. And yeah you can't complain about their art style since you're just reading it in an illegal site.

    Nick May 19, 2021 2:47 am

    What would you feel if someone told you that your art is ugly and that person who told you that was reading it in an illegal site? What would you feel?

    tebbysweet May 19, 2021 3:50 am

    No, it's not lol. I actually was fairly nice about it. I tried to explain WHY I didn't like the art and what about it I found unappealing and why it didn't vibe with me. You don't have to like my opinion, or agree with it, but all I did was use one regular adjective to describe the art and you're in my replies telling me what I can and can't do? Again, that's the purpose of comments is to express our feelings and thoughts about the story. They will not all be positive. I do not have to sugarcoat a negative review just so sensitive people like you don't get offended by a single word. I can promise you that this artist has thicker skin than you do and understands that not everyone will like what they do. As an author and artist myself, I get that what I make isn't going to impress everyone. It's okay for someone to express their opinion in a comment section. I'm not going out of my way to harass this artist or drag their work wherever I can - I reviewed it, and for some reason that's set you off. It doesn't matter what site this is on lol? There's still a comment section for the purpose of expressing our opinions? You don't have to pretend to like something you don't just to comment here, Nick. And I'm not going to start just because you're ~bothered.~

    Nick May 19, 2021 9:01 am

    Honey, you shouldn't have to sugarcoat your opinions and pretend that you like it. What i'm trying to say is be careful of what words you'll use, coz you don't know if that person is thick skinned or not. You haven't even met them so how can you be sure that they're thick skinned? You can state your opinion without harsh words right? You can point what's the defect on it without saying such words. And as you said that you're an author and an artist, so you should know the feeling. And also i asked you a question, why did you drop your statement without answering my question? It's kinda rude to me lol. And also it does matter the site lol, if you're not paying for their artwork you're not the one to say such words.

    Nick May 19, 2021 10:54 am

    Btw thank you for wasting your time having an argument with me lol, you help me alot for my upcoming debate wink* love lots

    tebbysweet May 19, 2021 11:00 am

    I made it perfectly clear how I felt about your question, "honey," I'm sorry the context clues went a bit over your head. I wouldn't care if someone had a negative opinion about my works because that's life. I'm not going to feel any particular way - it happens. Not every opinion or reaction in this world is going to be sugar-coated and perfectly tailored so you never have to hear a harsh thing, Nick. We don't live in bubbles or safe spaces where just because YOU tell ME that something I say is too harsh, that I have to agree with or listen to you. It's my opinion, and I'll continue to have it. I said the word UGLY. I said nothing so offensive for you to STILL BE IN MY REPLIES telling me what I can and can't do in a comment section of a manwha. Good lord, you must be absolutely useless in the real world if a single word on this site bothered you so much. You're gonna be okay, Nick. The illustrator is gonna be okay, Nick. The world isn't ending, Nick. And for the last time, the site literally doesn't matter. People are here to read and discuss their opinions and that's why there's a comment section. Just because you don't LIKE my opinion or how I stated it doesn't mean I can't have it. Now please, go bother someone else on this site. If you look closely, there's plenty more with opinions like mine for you to pick from.

    pixachu~ May 26, 2021 1:03 am

    since you say this is a review, i think it's better to deliver it to the author or in the official site, who knows ur opinion can help the author especially ur opinion sounds like critics.

    btw this is a suggestion, no need to reply me long like the way u reply other's comment cus i won't read a long argument lol.

    tebbysweet May 26, 2021 1:08 am
    since you say this is a review, i think it's better to deliver it to the author or in the official site, who knows ur opinion can help the author especially ur opinion sounds like critics.btw this is a suggesti... pixachu~

    and there's no need for you to reply to me again at all xoxo