Idk if I should spoil u or nah but the story is not really dumb it's more like a, detective type atm as both of them are solving stuff and there's really no a lot of romance involve so
There is not a lot romace yet ╮(￣▽￣)╭
Its actually pretty good. I thought the same but I kept reading and it doesn't have much romance so far just detective stuff it's pretty good ngl.
Yea! And MC is strong too
Well, regardless of what genre it is, the maturity level of both the writing and the storyline was obvious in that one scenario. If I'm reading a fantasy plot about emperors and kingdoms etc, I'm expecting the plot to take itself seriously. They just strolled into a courtyard full of teenagers and were like yo man, you're getting married. lol that's just... all I need to know about every other situation in this story. I'm sure this story appeals to plenty of people. It's just not the sort of story that appeals to me.
But that doesn't define the whole story just because you read one scenario and yes it's very stupid to start off with "oi your getting married" But that doesn't mean it will lead to them gettin married immediately, anyways I'm just saying that story is not dumb and that's all but that doesn't mean you have to read it we all have our preference so ╮(￣▽￣)╭
They literally just walked up to him in a training yard full of men and ladies watching them and were like hey, you're getting married, you're sixteen, it's time, oh and she'll be here soon. Lmao what in the wattpad is this? I know it's tempting to get to the FL & ML meeting but damn, world building is crucial if you don't want your story to come off as dumb and unbelievable as... well, as this. Lmao they really just rolled up in front of god and everyone and dropped major ass information about the future of the empire in front of a bunch of kids. Ridiculous.