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Yaoi_Girl May 12, 2021 8:45 pm

I can't believe I sat here on my bed, going through this story, punching my pillow every time the ML slapped and punched someone without getting the full story, he was way too irrational. Honestly, I LOVE this story, but the character development is off.

Nate doesn't like the red head girl, but he's marrying her because he got her pregnant. We didn't really see their story progress. Also, Nate's bodyguard and that brown haired guy got together, but it wasn't neccessary, nor did it make sense. She loved Nate, but after officially rejecting her, the brown haired guy confessed and she quickly accepted. I really wish that I would've seen how they sorted things out. And, in the end, the ML never found out what the MC's sister actually did to her. I reallky wanted to see his reaction to that. But, maybe she will tell him later, 'cause it says that this story is incomplete.

Anyways, the story was good, but it had a lot angst. Characters were okay. I give this an 8/10

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