Usually i like when stories deviate from the standard tropey formula but this just reads like a 13 year old's edgy self insert wattpad novel. It makes 0 sense she goes from saint to psychopath. the pacing is bad the characters are shallow. the motivations make no sense. Things go from A to C and never explain what was B. Like why did the top criminal adopt some kid? how did she topple him? why even? Does she even still have saint powers? TBH why is she even mad? It seems like the goddess did her a solid sending her back to fix the future. like this is what she kinda asked for. Why kidnap a freaking DUKES son? how does that make sense? Idk this is just my personal opinion.
Usually i like when stories deviate from the standard tropey formula but this just reads like a 13 year old's edgy self insert wattpad novel. It makes 0 sense she goes from saint to psychopath. the pacing is bad the characters are shallow. the motivations make no sense. Things go from A to C and never explain what was B. Like why did the top criminal adopt some kid? how did she topple him? why even? Does she even still have saint powers? TBH why is she even mad? It seems like the goddess did her a solid sending her back to fix the future. like this is what she kinda asked for. Why kidnap a freaking DUKES son? how does that make sense? Idk this is just my personal opinion.