i love characters, i love the plot. but the storytelling is unfortunately confusing and all over the place; some of the event don't match the way characters are. even though panels are in correct order, it seems as if you jumped pages. art is incredible. thankfully, there isn't any assault scenes, very rare in omegaverse. this really could be a masterpiece, if executed differently or in more detailed manner.
i love characters, i love the plot. but the storytelling is unfortunately confusing and all over the place; some of the event don't match the way characters are. even though panels are in correct order, it seems as if you jumped pages. art is incredible. thankfully, there isn't any assault scenes, very rare in omegaverse. this really could be a masterpiece, if executed differently or in more detailed manner.