It's not a bad story. Each of the characters are portrayed as complex individuals with their own interests and ambitions. The problem isn't the story or the characters. it's the arrangement of the characters and how they are presented to the readers. Asahi is brought in as this sweet bean alpha who gets all this screen time. I figure that it's done to take some of the attention off of our busy body beta, and it works but as the story progresses our cute alpha end us sticking out like a sore thumb. He quickly becomes redundant as tsukasa's feelings are revealed and the story begins to wrapped up. Not only that, the story is arranged like a love triangle, but falls short. All in all, it's a good story but it comes off lack luster because it has a massive flaw that none of the readers can look past. What the heck happens to asahi? #cananalphahegetsomeloveplz?
It's not a bad story. Each of the characters are portrayed as complex individuals with their own interests and ambitions. The problem isn't the story or the characters. it's the arrangement of the characters and how they are presented to the readers. Asahi is brought in as this sweet bean alpha who gets all this screen time. I figure that it's done to take some of the attention off of our busy body beta, and it works but as the story progresses our cute alpha end us sticking out like a sore thumb. He quickly becomes redundant as tsukasa's feelings are revealed and the story begins to wrapped up. Not only that, the story is arranged like a love triangle, but falls short. All in all, it's a good story but it comes off lack luster because it has a massive flaw that none of the readers can look past. What the heck happens to asahi? #cananalphahegetsomeloveplz?