it was okay at first

snoopy May 6, 2021 10:44 am

dammit the ending seems rushed and super half-assed . the rapist got away, and he's suddenly cured just like that? I think he needs to go to therapy instead

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    LeatherKitten April 28, 2024 9:11 pm

    Right. 8 chapters and this is the best ending we could get? It wasn’t a bad story, but chopping out some of the dragging in the middle and using the last few chapters to develop a more proper conclusion could have saved it.