I just wrote a damn paragraph but my page refreshed ヽ(`Д´)ﾉ I'll try to remember what I wrote lol, So basically, I couldve sworn he gets with junseo that's the only reason I came back to reread but he doesnt! Also I cant believe it went from the mc getting rejected then us finding out the dude liked him the whole time!?! When never entailing he did. I mean first of all the dude has no story and is basically just a side character! No flavor no nothing just known as a crush... also red head wasn't even necessary seeing as he didnt add much only a bit of jealousy but that's it! We dont get anything from this dude! Like come on the mc's friend at least was a good character seeing as he had a past with the 2nd ml Junseo but ends up accepting his friend! This story in my opinion couldve gone without red head and he couldve just been known as the child's first time he found out he likes guys, then went on to show the mc in school crushing on a classmate and like in the story reaching out online, finding a friend(junseo) who helps and along the way fixing the past between the friend and junseo, and in the middle somewhere showing the friend coming to that he shouldn't be homophobic or hateful just cuz of the past and accepting the mc plus junseo. Then finally the mc realizes somewhere along the way he liked junseo and didnt realize until Junseo's confession which Is the turning point ig! Like this story felt to me at least as if the writer just wanted to get it over with...but dont get me wrong it had some good points but got bad halfway plus the ending was sorta forced I say :/ like some things make me question? Ugh anyways I wrote more than I did last time but technically you get my drift I hope? ┑(￣Д ￣)┍
I just wrote a damn paragraph but my page refreshed ヽ(`Д´)ﾉ I'll try to remember what I wrote lol,
So basically, I couldve sworn he gets with junseo that's the only reason I came back to reread but he doesnt! Also I cant believe it went from the mc getting rejected then us finding out the dude liked him the whole time!?! When never entailing he did. I mean first of all the dude has no story and is basically just a side character! No flavor no nothing just known as a crush... also red head wasn't even necessary seeing as he didnt add much only a bit of jealousy but that's it! We dont get anything from this dude! Like come on the mc's friend at least was a good character seeing as he had a past with the 2nd ml Junseo but ends up accepting his friend! This story in my opinion couldve gone without red head and he couldve just been known as the child's first time he found out he likes guys, then went on to show the mc in school crushing on a classmate and like in the story reaching out online, finding a friend(junseo) who helps and along the way fixing the past between the friend and junseo, and in the middle somewhere showing the friend coming to that he shouldn't be homophobic or hateful just cuz of the past and accepting the mc plus junseo. Then finally the mc realizes somewhere along the way he liked junseo and didnt realize until Junseo's confession which Is the turning point ig! Like this story felt to me at least as if the writer just wanted to get it over with...but dont get me wrong it had some good points but got bad halfway plus the ending was sorta forced I say :/ like some things make me question? Ugh anyways I wrote more than I did last time but technically you get my drift I hope? ┑(￣Д ￣)┍