Translation is not an easy job so I applaud you for trying your best to do it, there is the whole thing about the official translation and all but thats not the point, I like how you would put disclaimers and saying that you're sorry if it doesn't make sense, but it's the effort that counts, thanks for the translation.
Translation is not an easy job so I applaud you for trying your best to do it, there is the whole thing about the official translation and all but thats not the point, I like how you would put disclaimers and saying that you're sorry if it doesn't make sense, but it's the effort that counts, thanks for the translation.