Are you even good enough to draw a manga?
Oh come on... Sounds like you NEVER criticize something in your life. And don't give me that shit that the question doesn't mean anything bad. I'm not a child anymore. By the way, can you read? I said a REVIEW and I will review it the way I want. You don't like it, make one that will go according to your liking. Pathetic fool.
But you don't have to put it that way, you could just say, you don't like the art, i don't like it also cause it's messy
Aah.. You want me to be frank and say it was damn to read as fuck? Lol XD you were right I should be direct next time. This one has no improvement whatsoever. The uke and the seme don't have chemistry for each other. I've read hundreds of YAOI's already and I'm totally looking for good ones. Not just art, but mainly the plot. I have saved many which dont have a good art, but have awesome storyline. You can check what I them in my account. You may find it nice. (￣∇￣")
In the end, I just gave it one star. I felt like I've wasted my time reading this. Frankly speaking, it could have been better if the characters and the background arts have had some developments.