My brain-

SnazzyGxat April 28, 2021 5:14 am

The speech bubbles are too wordy and the story is a bit fast-paced cuz first thing I know we fighting snake peepz, then merman and now we fighting dollz- This may not have much experience so far because it's a bit all over the place, but I'll keep reading it to see if it progresses better

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