I felt like the last few chapters were rushed. One chapter the chef left to work abroad fo...

KweenRecluse April 25, 2021 6:50 pm

I felt like the last few chapters were rushed. One chapter the chef left to work abroad for a year and the next chapter he’s back. Like there could have been some chapters of them having a long distant relationship. I would have also like to see them have dinner with the parents after they’ve become accepting. Also the second couple barely had a story. It would’ve been great if the seme would have had a reunion with the guy he slept with back in high school. Maybe that could’ve helped him decide on pursuing a relationship with the red haired guy. I hope there’s a few extra chapters focusing on the second couple because so far they just felt like filler scenes for the main story.

Responses
    Dinpochan April 25, 2021 6:51 pm

    From what i read in comment, that the second couple ending is bad?


    Then, what about the first couple?
    Is it alright?

    I want to know first before reading this.

    (●'◡'●)ノ

    KweenRecluse April 25, 2021 7:09 pm
    From what i read in comment, that the second couple ending is bad?Then, what about the first couple?Is it alright?I want to know first before reading this.(●'◡'●)ノ Dinpochan

    The story is good, I personally just felt like the last few chapters were rushed. First couple has a happy ending. The second couple also does, but the story doesn’t get that deep into describing their relationship. They end up together but not really official.

    Dinpochan April 25, 2021 8:14 pm
    The story is good, I personally just felt like the last few chapters were rushed. First couple has a happy ending. The second couple also does, but the story doesn’t get that deep into describing their relati... KweenRecluse

    Thank you soooo much,