Where did the plot go?

Luna April 16, 2016 4:00 am

The plot vanished from this story. It went from guy wanting to live his dream and forced to be host/whore to do so, to guy determined to be the best host/whore ever and falling in love with the guy that more or less humiliated him for his own amusement. HUH?!
It doesn't come off as rushed but I feel that there was meant to be more to this. It's the only reason why the plot vanished.

Responses
    takame June 1, 2016 9:53 pm

    he wanted to get both tho. the seme and the grand prix. that's why he chose to stay at the host club. seme is basically playing mind games with him and they were both tough, kind of like beastly types... no frilly doki-doki needed (or something like that) their courtship is kind of non-standard ( ̄∇ ̄")
    also, uke is a tough cookie to beat so if he so wanted to leave, he will. he never saw himself as a victim, he view everything as an opportunity and a stepping stone.

    Luna June 2, 2016 12:10 am
    he wanted to get both tho. the seme and the grand prix. that's why he chose to stay at the host club. seme is basically playing mind games with him and they were both tough, kind of like beastly types... no fri... takame

    Possible. But he hated having to be sexually trained. He was being used and he figured it out which I'm proud of him for doing. But the main plot was him determined to be a racer and if this continued I have no doubt it would have gone down that dumb route where he gives up because. He didn't seem to care anymore and was determined to prove he wasn't a joke, when at the same time he was making himself one by being a whore. All it took was one person who wanted revenge or out of jealousy to expose him and ruin everything. I'm not talking about to the press but to his Father and his Team. This had potential but it drowned. The relationship between the seme and uke doesn't have any emotion to it. The uke sleeps with the seme first because it's his "job" and he's proving a point. Then when the manga ends the uke suddenly is like "Oh it's love." REALLY? I say fail, completely.

    piggy gone home today June 29, 2018 6:51 am

    I love how articulately you expressed literally everything I felt !
    (๑•ㅂ•)و✧
    It's not the sex work that was a turn off, neither was it the lack of "fluff" (I hate overly fluffy yaoi tbh; and LOVE me some strong, independent ukes).
    It was manipulation and a rushed, unrealistic "character development". Also, the seme being an utter asshole didn't help either.