cldve been good

ari April 21, 2021 10:53 pm

I dropped this at chpt 27...

- pacing was too fast and made it seem like it was written by a 13 yr old
- dialogue seems forced
- events don't flow (i lowkey got whiplash from how abruptly the scenes changed)
- character development was rushed
- all the important events up until chpt 27 was only brushed over

Bottom line: This cldve been good but I feel like it wasn't portrayed well.

NOTE: Everyone's likes and dislikes r subjective so pls keep in mind that this is just MY opinion.

Responses
    koushu April 22, 2021 4:58 am

    ( ̄ε(# ̄)Σ agreed ngl