I've read everything
Are you trying to make me fall for you or something? Thanks for reading it all
You've pointed out everything I was thinking about.. the story is good but it's hella confusing.. somethings don't make sense at all .. and I also like number 8 , I hate the fact that she's using him and than it's obvious that she will leave him and disappear like thin air .. and he will run crazy mad looking for her while she's nonchalant about everything and she will be like what you have been looking for me all these years.... UGH just thinking about it makes me angry
Nah it was really good u don't need to thank me
Why wouldn't I try to make u fall in love with me?
Ok so i read everything and i agree.
Also the fiance and brother thing is confusing to me like is the blonde her brother or fia ce and is there two blondes one that is her finace and one thats her brother like I'm confused man ヽ(`Д´)ﾉ
Okay so do you remember when she became Grand Master and they were at his coronation I do believe and she goes out to the balcony and this blonde guy bursting through the door and just talked to her about being her fiance then it flashes back how he also has his memories of his past life? that was her fiance he has more bright blonde hair why her brother has like no color to his hair but it's still blonde plus she has two brothers the one with the white hair and the one with the light blonde hair but that's what I'm saying they just randomly introduced that she had a fiance this whole time so that's what really confused me
EXACTLY like when I read the title I thought that he was just going to be awful like I wouldn't like him or anything but that is not the case and I hate when the MC uses good people for their own gain especially when she decided that she will pull him completely over to her side when his mom just died like that's so fucked up
I- uhm I wasn't expecting this type of response
I AGREE WITH EVERY SINGLE THING YOU SAID!!!!
i read everything and i agree w everything esp w 6 and 8 like maybe those stuff has reasons for being there but like im so confused idek
I kinda hate how after her gender-bent look the fairies are just never mentioned again. Like why even include them in the story if they're just a one-time thing?
I have a lot of things to say about this so far so I'm just going to do it by numbers
1. Her dad can rot idc it's not her fault her mom died it's no one's fault and you blame it on a child? Also forcing your sons to be mean and abandon her as well gives you a special place in hell
2. I'm going to forgive her brothers not all the way because they really didn't try and they only realized after she left them and stopped trying to get their attention they are all complete shit for brains but at least the brothers are trying to change even if it is too late
3. I usually don't like the possessive male leads but this one's different for some reason I know it probably will turn into an obsession because she's all he has but I do like it so far and I like him and his character development
4. I really REALLY like Char but I got a thing for red heads so Lucy is number 1automatically and I really hope to see her more often
5. How can she not sense that guy following her around? Is he just that good of an assassin? Is she just not paying attention? That's probably impossible right? So either he's just better than her or it's just for plot
6. I love her ex fiance he is so sweet! BUT WHY DOES HE HAVE HIS MEMORIES?! LIKE THEY ADDED THAT IN THERE FOR WHAT THERE'S NO PLOT TO THAT SO FAR! It does not make any sense how he also has his memories but literally nobody else does?? If I hadn't known better I would have thought that he was the ml what was the point of giving him his memories as well if he's barely in the story? Also love how we didn't even know she had a fiance? He literally came out of nowhere I even thought that it was her brother at first XD and then she said it was her fiance and I was all types of confused
7. HOW DID THEY TURN A LITERAL HUMAN INTO A SWORD AN OBJECT?! I'M STILL CONFUSED ON THAT
8. I don't like the fact that she literally using this kid for her own revenge I know he's gone along with it and everything but this is manipulation at it's finest not to mention she did it right after his mom passed away where he was at his weakest? I don't like that at all if she wanted revenge she could have just did it herself and picked up people along the way that agreed with her ideology about how The empire needs to go I understand that this was the easiest way but using him like that don't sit right with me especially when he was just a kid even if he is a genius
9. I feel like the story gets confusing sometimes
10. IT ALSO FEELS LIKE THE ARTHUR WANTED TO THROW EVERYTHING IN TO MAKE THIS GIRL OP like she can speak to fairies? How? was her mom a fairy?? But none of her brothers can see them so how does that work? It said that she was like half fairy right or something like that so how come she's the only one that can see and speak to fairies but her brothers can't?? And she's also a grand sword Master, a master manipulator and negotiator, a genius, fast, beautiful, mature like she's literally everything
11. I really want to know how things would have turned out if his mom stayed alive
12. AT THE EVENT WHY DID THE EMPEROR NOT QUESTION THE FACT THAT LIZ KNEW ABOUT THE FLOWER THAT BARELY ANYBODY KNOWS ABOUT?? O.o like I would have been really suspicious but he was just like "oh the flower somebody he knows must be in pain I'll give it to him" LMAO WHAAAAT that was just so funny to me
13 and finally I wish it had been her dad instead of her mom I just know things would have been so much different for her and once again the dad can rot