Just because you read fin for free doesn’t mean you can’t criticize it. It just means you’re not a sucker for wasting your precious money on something you dislike. Anyways I agree like at first the art was beautiful but now as we get further in it’s hard to ignore the 3D accessories that literally every artist that either doesn’t know how to draw it or was too lazy to draw it. I’m guessing something will happen 2 chapters from now since she just saw all that demonic shit or something idk
I agree. Also there are inconsistencies in the story. In the begining we are told that Sylvia was plain and for that reason people didn't treat her well, so she started eating a lot as a coping mechanism and became fat. She was always plain so losing weight shouldn't change that, but then when she loses weight and becomes gorgeous. Dealing with being a plain girl in a fancy beautiful family was the premise of the story now it's just adventures of mary sue ( ̄へ ̄)
The FL does come off as a mary sue, the art is amazing but it dulls as you read the story more and more and there's no character development, just reminders of how "great the FL is", she worked for nothing and just got everything handed to her. But then again who am I to complain when I'm reading this for free LMAOOOO