Hrmmmmm

SomeRandomBitch April 19, 2021 4:36 pm

Idk but this story seems kinda dry... Like it had so much potential but it kinda is just meh¯_(ツ)_/¯

Responses
    fab April 19, 2021 5:06 pm

    I think its getting stuck on the sex, rather then the characters progressing, on a personal level or on the story level. I mean sex is good but the story needs to keep moving on.

    Twips April 19, 2021 7:31 pm
    I think its getting stuck on the sex, rather then the characters progressing, on a personal level or on the story level. I mean sex is good but the story needs to keep moving on. fab

    Definitely. I feel like we should've had a flashback of what happened the night the MC got pregnant, since we the readers, already know who the father is

    fab April 19, 2021 9:51 pm
    Definitely. I feel like we should've had a flashback of what happened the night the MC got pregnant, since we the readers, already know who the father is Twips

    i mean anything that moves this ship is welcome, rather then stale sex, the prince mysteriously loving mc and the mc unaware, agreeing to fuck and hiding the pregnancy. And the murderer still on the loose, there are many plot points but there is not real progression on anything