I think its getting stuck on the sex, rather then the characters progressing, on a personal level or on the story level. I mean sex is good but the story needs to keep moving on.
I think its getting stuck on the sex, rather then the characters progressing, on a personal level or on the story level. I mean sex is good but the story needs to keep moving on. fab
Definitely. I feel like we should've had a flashback of what happened the night the MC got pregnant, since we the readers, already know who the father is
Definitely. I feel like we should've had a flashback of what happened the night the MC got pregnant, since we the readers, already know who the father is Twips
i mean anything that moves this ship is welcome, rather then stale sex, the prince mysteriously loving mc and the mc unaware, agreeing to fuck and hiding the pregnancy. And the murderer still on the loose, there are many plot points but there is not real progression on anything
Idk but this story seems kinda dry... Like it had so much potential but it kinda is just meh¯_(ツ)_/¯