After reading Manhwa/Manhua I noticed that it's really difficult to cram a story into 5 chapters. Some Mangas do accomplish that, but the majority of them don't have that. It's kinda sad since so many Mangas have really good concepts. This one has the potential of a 100+ chapter story since the author has so many storylines to explore.
not really my issue with this manga, but okay...
just gonna say that even if the mangaka decided to lengthen this story but still kept the plot, then the problems are still there.
What is the issue then?
in reference to the topics made under this manga, the most apparent and most overlooked issue is this. Clyde was introduced as a home invader turned r*pist just two chapters in. the sudden romantic relationship between them just days after does not excuse Clyde's arrestable actions. the VERY, VERY (can't emphasize this enough) least he could've done was to take accountability by apologizing to Sugimori - never did.
in conclusion, Clyde is a piece of shit.
Yeah, that's why I said, if the author made it longer it could've turned into a slow burn, changed these aspects of non-con and fleshed out the story more then this could be a 5/5.
oh, I see. then I agree that if all necessary revisions were made and if it's lengthened, I definitely see great potential in this.
Haha, for me lengthening a work is taking something like a shortstory, where everything is crammed and rushed, to a story with more space to develop a relationship/plot organically. In most of one volume manga everything just happens from one moment to another ot gives me whiplash. Like that stuff like dub-con and non-con can be left out.
"In most of one volume manga everything just happens from one moment to another ot gives me whiplash."
couldn't agree more to this, lol.
if you're the type of person who overlooks (willfully or not) the actual problems of the story and just wants your regular "hot seme-uke action", then this piece of work is for you.