More room for improvement

cheeky April 3, 2016 10:48 pm

For art work I can give 10 star but coz it lacks more facial expressions,the hot scene seems sp dry.sensei needs to improve on this part.other than that,no other complaints

Responses
    supremecurt July 24, 2016 4:06 pm

    Agree, the seme was smiling the whole time while they're having sex as if he's just having a conversation over the dining table.

    Peeves October 28, 2016 12:20 am
    Agree, the seme was smiling the whole time while they're having sex as if he's just having a conversation over the dining table. supremecurt

    So true. It was weird especially in the last chapter with the countdown. ( ̄∇ ̄")