Honestly this story is kinda boring, but the art is really pretty except for the fact that...

I know they are taking way to long setting things up. The premise is good, but they should have had a good editor tell them to cut everything that’s happened down to 1-2 chapters. How long we spent on the stupid egg hunt without anything of significance happening is criminal. It should be chapter one wake up as Luna and learns Queen Athena’s will appoints the 4 as possible candidates. Chapter 2 as Luna runs assassin tries to kill her see Pluto and assassin daddy take care of it. In fact you could really cut it out entirely. Then Cut to acting king explain he wants her dead. Done 17 chapters down to 2. move onto something funny or fluffy. That’s more what the premise promises to be. If you want this done right read “youngest princess” that’s funny and fluffy. That’s how this one should be done or at least that same kind of feel.

As an aside I hate when they try to make the villain goofy or silly. All the tension is gone then. Am I supposed to feel like this fat idiot can be dangerous or come up with any sort of underhanded plan that could actually succeeded? Even if it is a fluff story you need a good villain

Yeaaa they dragged it out for way too long. Maybe in the future the chapters would be more interesting or smth. Fortunately, I have already read “the youngest princess,” but I stopped halfway so I could binge read the rest in one go once it is finished hehe.

Omg exactly like now his image is just a side character and most ppl will prbly forget ab him since he seems kind of meaningless. I hope they would add a cooler antagonist who is actually smart and “evil”.

Yeah and by saying anyone can challenge any of them for their canadicy spot, but doing so would be like a mouse challenging a tiger is basically just saying there is no real threat to anyone at any time and therefore no real stakes

Also, there’s no deadline/set date for princess to choose daddy and the stand in is a goof, but he doesn’t seem to be doing terrible so there’s no tension or urgency. Also, why even add the 4 holy items if there is no true point in having or finding them? Just look for them cause I said so? Finally, why even do the daddy becomes king thing? Doesn’t princess become the ruler when she comes of age? What’s the point in her even picking someone. OMG there’s so many things frustrating me about this. I’m with you 1-3 more chapters to at least give me some fluffy father daughter stuff, but if not I’m out

Agreed. The only good thing this manga has going on is the art. But after a while of seeing the men again and again...not even that is going to be enough to keep me here. I hope things pick up...