All over the place

Sephy April 8, 2021 3:11 am

This is a mess. I stopped reading at chapter 6 ( I think?) I couldn't take it anymore.
Between the messed up drawings (full body shot / hands / bent necks) or the dragging of the only obstacle in the plot... naaaah. The artist needs a little more practice. (I also don't like the "glowing eyes" but whatever) I'd forgive this if the story was good. Nope.

The premises are great : opposite characters in terms of supernatural background, class and age. But the execution was not good. First the drawings jump from one place to the other. The main character moves a lot, from a party venue to their room, to their workplace, to their classroom. If there's no clear indication of time and place, at least the drawings should convey that, but it's messy. Then the relationship stalls because the only point of tension the author uses, is the desire of the vampire to get the werewolf to work for him. He claims the werewolf had an interesting profile but adds nothing to back that up. Like is he having a hard time recruiting engineers? Why that specific werewolf? Is he having a hard time separating his work from his personal life? Why is he so immature and tactless when he's a damn CEO and 200 years old?? I know this is yaoi world but a CEO is at least good at communicating or selling their idea. Idk it lacks depth so its hard to understand why a character is as obsessed as he is. He doesn't even like werewolves he only had amazing sex with the werewolf.

Plus side characters, whose only personality is yelling and being angry. Their facial expressions often seem stuck. It's overall very unpleasant.

Idk. Maybe with good drawings / a better pace this could've been interesting. Or if the art remains as such then the plot would need improvement.. Overall a letdown.

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