The beginning was fun and quite interesting but than author decided to turn duke into a je...

DeadPenguine April 7, 2021 4:43 pm

The beginning was fun and quite interesting but than author decided to turn duke into a jealous moron and make Jace an irresponsible idiot and use every possible cliche ever to make this story unbearable)
How can a clever and strong person leave a 12-year-old child in the middle of a bustling street because someone can say something mean to them?
Disappointing.....

Responses
    sakusaonthahauz April 7, 2021 4:44 pm

    Bruh totally on point

    Giffle April 7, 2021 5:28 pm

    Jace's reaction in that situation, although amounts to neglect, was, in my opinion, a totally human reaction. There was someone who bullied him, who had cruelly victimised him in the past and he was steps away from facing this person. Who wouldn't do all they could to duck and dodge/hide from that person? I would. Noah, sadly in that moment, was forgotten and it was Jace's fault, but I totally understand his reaction.