I really, really, enjoyed this. I do wish it would have been longer so we could see deeper...

Buggaboo April 6, 2021 11:45 pm

I really, really, enjoyed this. I do wish it would have been longer so we could see deeper character development, like with the dad, but it is amazing definitely in my top ten. One thing I REALLY wish they would have focused on is the sisters journey and her relationship with jealousy and acceptance. Unlike some others I really admire how she changed even though her actions were unacceptable. I wanted to see a more intrusive and darker explanation of how she felt and thought. I wanted to see her communicate and reconcile with her brother and mom and watch that growth. I especially love that they left her as an independent character, in the sense that she didn't have a love interest. I think that makes her story even more powerful because we see her as an individual, where her actions aren't tied to her sexual orientation. Anyway amazing read, 10/10 would recommend.

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    Cyansky April 7, 2021 5:07 am

    Indeed. I definitely agree to everything that you said. How I wish they didnt gloss over the forgiveness scene and the explanation on everyone's side because as much as Hanah was an ass, there was a bit of it that also came from the parents.
    Even before Jun was born, her inferiority complex already took root but her parents didn't notice because they were too busy with Jun being the male child. I just wish that she could have explained why her inferiority complex grew over the years and how her mom's doting attitude towards Jun somehow unknowingly exacerbated the problem.
    All in all, it was still nice.
    I do need Rin's mom and Hyesook side story tho. I wonder how the confession would play out and what will go between her and her ex gf from there