You are so right. The beginnings great! Even the ending part and the epilogue was going great and then all the sudden it turned into one big ball of disaster. What kind of ending was that? That made no sense. I was so confused at the end that I just threw my hands in the air. Like seriously? Talked about leaving on a sour note. I think I couldn't throw darts at a Mad Lib book and come up with a better ending. I have so many questions after that. Are they still stuck to Virtual Reality world? Does the girl ever discover that the virtual reality boy is her brother? What happened to whatever was going on in this virtual world? Are they living in the virtual world now? What is going on? What happened with the kidnapping thing. Wasn't this a flashback? So we didn't get back to the main story after this flashback because the flashback is the ending? This makes no sense. Also they turn the parents of neglectful parents? I was so confused. Does the Android and the guy ever hook up? Who's an Android now? Are they all Androids?
Yeah the thing with the daughter was weird but oh well ╮(￣▽￣)╭there are a bunch of weird things in that story that are normal for the people in that world as it seems (≧∀≦)
At the beginning it was actually a really good story and I enjoyed it so much, The gender bender really was the best part because so many funny/Unexpected things happened~ but the last chapters with the kids came.... I just don’t know the cringe came to me xD
Gui our gay elf suddenly got pregnant in her state, that was actually really sweet from him
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( I couldn’t finish it before it was down for a bit I forgot a few things ) the part with the FL’s daughter and the 2nd ml I was so freaking surprising because the daughter is 15 and he’s like 33, plus he was first interested in her mother and then he came to like her daughter.
And the rest of the people just be like “ we approve it “XDDD
I can understand it that they want to have a happy ending for the 2nd ml but I just couldn’t stop laughing sorry xD
I’m glad I read it it was really nice story :’3