yes i feel like so much of this was left untouched. you’d run into an issue and then it was solved. there was a lack of depth. like they’re relationship developed but we never really see any of it. and there were too many plot points that it did indeed feel like a mess. i feel like more could have been done on the alphas character and past. he developed out of the blue. also i totally agree with you on what you said about the omega. when reading it just irked me that he was so childlike. i feel like with his character he could’ve been more intelligent and calculated. like personality wise if he was smart i would’ve liked him. he’s just a rich idiot. and his mother’s death? that could’ve been interesting to the story it had potential.
So glad you got more upvotes than down votes lol. Looks like idiots don't read this book, like your comment on my suha was filled with people not understanding what a review is.
I don't like the story that much either but I did like that the uke was the one chasing the relationship. Most stories have the opposite.
As the title says, I got a few opinions on this book.
(this is more on the rant side then my regular reviews)
This story makes me very uncomfortable.Woo young acts like a child and looks like one. That made me fucking uncomfortable, and this feels like borderline pseudo shoto-con. Flame me for that one. The dynamic of a (typical) alpha and omega will always be toxic because of the power imbalance. But what was I expecting, there is no good omega verse. (Don't try to come to me with links)
The story itself never took itself seriously (doesn't have too, but it's really hard to include serious moments if you're going the fun, lighthearted comedy route) from the get go, and that really shows in how the serious moments are portrayed. At most, when the story mood changes, it feels like satire. This story is just one big fat trope, every aspect of it. The character's are barely fleshed out, never changing from their assigned trope, and main events that happened were cheap tropes.
The writing was barely coherent, making it to where the plot got very fuzzy in some places, the story direction switched multiple times, and overall, this was a big hot mess. The author couldn't focus on one idea before dropping it. This book feels like an unfinished thought. A forever incomplete book.
The dialogue was bleh, rarely taking itself seriously to show us for a moment that this love story was in fact, full of love. The author tells instead of shows, and it's honestly annoying. The love buildup was nonexistent, and I was was honestly very surprised when they suddenly started dating. This author seems to like creating something out of nothing, and the chemistry didn't really didn't't convince me enough that they seem like a good couple.
plot: 4/10
writing style: 0/10
art: uncomfy
pacing: ehh