No need to get so angry if you hate it so much just don’t read it and write your own story but no you fucking curse them out for their work like do it yourself then omg i hate people like you so much
:p I never said "fuck the author", I said "fuck the story". And even then, criticism is criticism, no matter what forms it comes in^^ There is no reason to sugarcoat your words.
and if you don't like what I said, write your own "nice" review.
What right do you have to hate this manga when you never pay to read this manga. You read this manga from pirates sites yet you critics it. I feel funny. You should have stop reading it at first chapter.
I'm good. If I had a shot for every time some Brought up that it was an illegal manga site, I'd be dead from alcohol poisoning.
You don't have right to criticism this manga since you never pay to read it. you just read it from illegal sites. Dropped it if you don't like it. No need to be angry and critics manga that you read illegal
what does me reading it illegally have to do with anything?
Nice to see another well-thought out review for this. The series had potential but oh boy did it fell off fast. I don't think most readers of this series read enough good yuri to actually give a comprehensive outlook for this manhwa. They rely solely on emotions and their ships. Then again, I think most readers here are around their pre-teen/teenage years so I understand some are still in their 'puberty' stage.
Negative review = hate
Really now.
lol? this is the second time I've seen this argument today. Just because you're reading this for free doesn't mean you have to blindly worship a webcomic. The author isn't gonna like you more when you're still reading this illegally, fyi. Also critic doesn't equal hate or anger towards the author. Chill <3
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This exactly lol. Look at these snowflakes trying their utmost best to cancel someone else's negative opinions, saying they're angry haters whatever. I mean if you don't like to read someone's criticism about the series then just ignore it and move on. It's that simple.
Right? Like they way they are acting makes them look children who can't take any kind of criticism for their favourite work which they probably are
I have a few words for this book. Since everyone wanted to see a Yuri review, here it is.
Where do I even begin? This story is clumsily written. There isn't much to say about this story because it never gave us anything. When we first started off the story, there was no hook. There was a "plot", but no hook. The character introductions were shit as always (just give me a cleverly written character intro for once!), and the pacing was uber fucking fast in the beginning.
The author started without a hook, and in turn, created clumsy stilts for this book. If the beginning was different, we wouldn't have this whiplash of a story. The author didn't give themselves a plot device or hook to start off with, so without anything to do in the beginning, we got the author creating events, and writing things around them just so that they have somewhere to move the story direction in.
This was so fucking fast that nothing in this story had time to develop. Everything the author introduced came and went in 2-5 chapters. This was insanely fast paced, and I kept getting whiplashed every time my attention was thrown in a different direction. I as the reader had 0 time to take in any event, because it all came and went with the speed of sonic. And because of this, the love story wasn't developed, the characters weren't fleshed out, and the realism was missing. Like, there was barely any [personality to the characters (some had absolutely none), the didn't get to see more scenes of doubt and love, and emotional conflict was rarely there! This is not a love story, it's just a cheap one shot that was originally supposed to have two chapters, but they added more fo no fucking reason lmfao.
This story doomed itself for failure in the first chapter. I'm not surprised that the ending got even faster. I wouldn't say rushed because this story was already sprinting, but damn did it go 100mph near the end.
art: 6/10
writing style: 3/10
pacing: 0/10
developed characters: 0/10
developed plot: 1/10
conclusion:
I fucking hated this.