Responses
Damn girl u wrote a whole essay
u just summed up everyt i felt! the action (mafia-police) plot is lacking, its like the idea is there & its good but the execution missed the mark. but kay’s hot tho kinda shipping him w chris. (≧∀≦)
This story has incredible potential but it’s been missing the mark for me. It’s still wildly entertaining but I’m not getting that WOOOOOOOOOW factor like I have with some others
I really like this so far.
2 things though.
1. I am getting concerned the story isn't going anywhere yet.
- Don't get me wrong, I like the interactions and the drama... but so far, we have seen nothing of an actual plot. There is so many direction and material, but it's already chapter 32 and we are still in the dark with where this story is going.
- The issue with just drama and anecdotal information is that it works in a slice of life, but this has such a more 'thriller vibe'
2. Characters are slightly inconsistent.
- That's no much, but, Chris doesn't seem to have any strong personality yet. He is just the nice friend who 'tries' to get yoon. But... what about the fact he keeps saying he is a police officer, but lives with a money launder and has been LITERALLY helping yoon make transaction for the Red mafia??
- Like... is he a dirty cop? Does he just pick law that he care about? What's up with that? Until we know more, he is inconsistent in my eyes.
- The cousin. Slightly more consistent...but his reasoning for ATTEMPTING murder is sooo weak. Like, there was other route they could have tried with him.
- Vasya. The most interesting so far, but ALL OVER THE PLACE. So, let's see where that will go.
- Yoon. So far so good. Kinda not consistent as well, but that can be explain.
- Kay. The most disappointing so far... I had SO MUCH HOPE, and new right away he was undercover... I was hoping CIA or FBI. But like... Wtf. The guys goes all the way to fake his own death, and then randomly just shows his face again without a real plan, or support. He is (so far) a complete incompetent.
- He (also as a police officer) introduce a civilian to a HEAD mafia. + Had sex with his assistant from his fake job... (work ethic, where are you?).
- The only reason why he shows up to Yoon is like... romantic? Like you couldn't get over that ass, so you are risking your ENTIRE cover , to give him a weak chip?
- Like... We ALL know that this isn't going to work. Where is the organise police? Where is the actual planning?
- Yes, I guess Kay isn't that bad... but... I have been use to SO good character in the past that were in Kay's position, and in comparison... Kay is... ugh.