What the fuck is this book

Mr.Blxckie 2.0 March 7, 2021 2:50 am

(I'm not going to be commenting about the translators work, because it was honestly pretty good. Thx translator^^)

sigh. Where do I begin.

-This is a Yaoi plot in it's truest form. I know it's supposed to be a comedy, but not even once, did they have a scene where the character actually realizes he's in a horrible situation. He just takes it, occasionally getting scared when the ml gets "big daddy mad" or sum shit like that.
He was kidnapped and threatened, yet he still ell in love. That is literally Stockholm syndrome. They are portraying such a illness in a "funny" light w/o giving a single hint of realism. It has comedy in all the wrong places, and at the most inopportune times. People touched the mc w/o consent multiple times, and it was played off as hot? The story was fast paced and confusing, basically just events happening, no plot. In the first chapter, he was basically assaulted and it was played off as "funny"- with is this shit book, i don't understand how someone ca n. enjoy such a piece of literature (dare I even call it that) when all it does is fail at being a comedy, has shitty pacing, nonexistent world building, and flat characters. Like, in the first chapter, no one decided to call the fbi to report the mafia? no one noticed the mafia group until now? huh? And, the characters are boring and flat. They have no real driving motive, and their only personality trait is being horny and assaulting people. WTF is this book.

Responses
    keiji akaashi March 7, 2021 3:18 am

    well damn
    yeah i agree with a lot of what you said, but you can also simply click off? this suits other people’s likes/tastes in manga/manhwas, and clearly not you
    it is a yaoi tbh, yaoi’s are usually porn without plot type stories

    Mr.Blxckie 2.0 March 7, 2021 3:20 am
    well damn yeah i agree with a lot of what you said, but you can also simply click off? this suits other people’s likes/tastes in manga/manhwas, and clearly not you it is a yaoi tbh, yaoi’s are usually porn ... keiji akaashi

    nope, any book that fails to treat harmful subjects in a good light is getting demolished in my book^^

    keiji akaashi March 7, 2021 3:28 am
    nope, any book that fails to treat harmful subjects in a good light is getting demolished in my book^^ Mr.Blxckie 2.0

    i respect that you dislike this book
    however others do like it
    don’t be petty and try to “demolish” a book that you can easily avoid. i tried speaking nicely, but you’re just being immature.

    Mr.Blxckie 2.0 March 7, 2021 3:32 am
    i respect that you dislike this book however others do like it don’t be petty and try to “demolish” a book that you can easily avoid. i tried speaking nicely, but you’re just being immature. keiji akaashi

    what...? I didn't cuss you our or say anything mean. I just said no. If harshly critiquing a book that laughs of sexual assault is me being "immature" then that's really weird. People who like this book are just enabling harmful tropes in Yaoi such as-and I say it again- taking sexual assault and painting it in a "sexy" and harmless light.

    Mimi March 7, 2021 3:45 am
    what...? I didn't cuss you our or say anything mean. I just said no. If harshly critiquing a book that laughs of sexual assault is me being "immature" then that's really weird. People who like this book are jus... Mr.Blxckie 2.0

    I actually agree with this statement. Honestly the plot for this BL is going nowhere and honestly by now I'm just staying for the baby. Nothing else seems to have any potential developing. In my book it's honestly already trash in terms of plot.