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TiredTM March 4, 2021 9:12 am

The metaphor of discovering colors after discovering life and love is romantic and fun but the execution of the story is not. This is my personal opinion so if you can't handle that, bye~

1. The female lead is sort of obnoxious because she acts like some sort of airhead heroine that just barges in. Honestly, if I were him I'd prob straight up kill her so she can stop harassing me.
Her personality so far is talking a lot.

2. The flow of the story is kind of wonky because the comic isn't depicting it right. For example, the ML punches douche bag brother - but we don't see it, we just see dickhead on the floor and that's? kinda? awks?

3. Related to wonky depiction is the fact that the art is mostly just characters at one angle. I can't draw for shit but please be more diverse.

4. Backstory? Never heard of her. Besides the obvious plot layout - who tf is the female lead? How was she recruited? Why does she have free range of things? Was that her first day when she reincarnated?

5. The premise of the story is interesting but kinda dumb in the sense where the whacko emperor with his obsession with something THAT stupid hasn't already killed him? It's also a really strange/random thing to start a plot. Like if we knew more about the emperor, how he came to be, whether or not he is a good ruler etc. then things would make more sense.

6. Character interactions are awkward.
FL -Hey random maid, I got love advice!
Maid - *monotone voice* Wow, how did you know?
Or when the random side character told her where to lady's gathering is like ?? Who you? Where to?

Responses
    IceCreamCheeseCake March 4, 2021 9:35 am

    Hmmm i guess it needs progress hahaha. But the fact that the prince's art was portrayed beautifully as he's described is already great so maybe the creator and author would realize their mistakes as it has so many plot holes and not much progress

    TiredTM March 4, 2021 10:06 am
    Hmmm i guess it needs progress hahaha. But the fact that the prince's art was portrayed beautifully as he's described is already great so maybe the creator and author would realize their mistakes as it has so m... IceCreamCheeseCake

    Yes it's much too early to judge the outcome of the story but I do hope there is a least some progress for its current shortcomings as more chapters are posted.

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