I have read the ch21 translated chapter in mangaowl somehow the translation feels wrong an...

Mello121 March 3, 2021 7:28 pm

I have read the ch21 translated chapter in mangaowl somehow the translation feels wrong and got me confused ): are we gonna get Better translation on mangago? or do you just copy each other work ? someone tell me

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    some perv March 3, 2021 7:30 pm

    No, they are two different translators.
    I think the translation on mangaowl is better than the one on mangago in terms of grammar and proofreading.

    Lyn March 3, 2021 7:44 pm

    The translations are done by different people. The translation on mangaowl is accurate most of the time. Which part is confusing you? Maybe I could help ^-^

    Mello121 March 3, 2021 8:17 pm
    The translations are done by different people. The translation on mangaowl is accurate most of the time. Which part is confusing you? Maybe I could help ^-^ Lyn

    there was a part when Jiwook was saying I wouldn't have known if you haven't pushed me away ??what is he talking about? and the next page got confused when he was asking Seungeon to let him Go does he mean end their friendship? and would he would slaps him 50 more

    Lola March 3, 2021 8:59 pm
    there was a part when Jiwook was saying I wouldn't have known if you haven't pushed me away ??what is he talking about? and the next page got confused when he was asking Seungeon to let him Go does he mean end ... Mello121

    About your second question, I think he meant that if Jiwook resists what was happening, SE would get mad and proceed to do whatever he wants so Jiwwok better just let him get some relief and don't push him more otherwise they will have to fight and Jiwook will have to slap him more than 50 times (in comparison with the first kiss event). So basically, it was a kind of a threatening that I personally found pretty upsetting. Like: "Ok, let us jerk off here since we're both horny and don't resist me otherwise I won't control myself and I will literally take you by force!". Was it really necessary? Don't think so but Seungeo is so unpredictable and unstable that I was relieved he didn't lose it at that moment with his stupid violence...

    Lyn March 3, 2021 10:47 pm
    there was a part when Jiwook was saying I wouldn't have known if you haven't pushed me away ??what is he talking about? and the next page got confused when he was asking Seungeon to let him Go does he mean end ... Mello121

    After Seungeon says he feels stuffy down there and his pants fell like they are going to burst.
    The conversation goes like this

    JSE: I was holding it in well, but you made a mistake hyung. Why did you make me sleep at your house? If you hadn't pushed me away, I would have gone on my own.

    (What he means is that if JiWook wasn't insisting on him going home(end of chap 19) he would've left on his own anyways. He was pent up already but was holding it in well(his urge to kiss and do something more to JiWook) and would take care of it on his own once he gets home but JiWook let him stay.)

    MJW: Ah...!
    MJW( inner thoughts): He must be crazy. What is he doing? It keeps touching/brushing down there(their crotchs).

    JSE: If you don't let me release it here, I'll do what I really want to do... Than you are gonna slap me 50 more times. We both don't want that. Right?

    ("slap him 50 more times" - he is refering to what happened when he kissed him that first time(chap 11) and JiWook slapped him, now if he really does what he wants to do(probably have sex with him) JiWook would probably slap him 50 times more)

    MJW:  Heueub... (sound describing when breathing in air/gasp) (Seungeon pressed their chrotches together)

    JSE: Answer me. You don't like that, do you?

    MJW: Haah...!
    MJW(inner thoughts): I don't want to fight again.
    MJW: Uh huh yes... (sfx: Nod)

    JSE: Ha, is that so? Hyung, I don't want to hurt you either. Then you have to listen to me carefully.

    MJW: Yes...(sfx: Nod)

    JSE: Take mine out and touch me. I'll touch you too.

    Gosh sorry this is so long but I hope things are clearer now for you ^-^



              

    Mello121 March 3, 2021 11:01 pm
    After Seungeon says he feels stuffy down there and his pants fell like they are going to burst.The conversation goes like thisJSE: I was holding it in well, but you made a mistake hyung. Why did you make me sle... Lyn

    sorry for the bother T_T , i get it now , thank you so much .

    Lyn March 3, 2021 11:11 pm
    sorry for the bother T_T , i get it now , thank you so much . Mello121

    It wasn't a brother, don't worry. And you are welcome ^-^

    Fatalpoison March 3, 2021 11:57 pm

    Personally i think the translation here is much h better