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i started reading when there were only like 20 chapters out and the plot was still pretty solid and now each time it updates ive forgotten more and more of the original plot cuz i can't be bothered to reread so from my pov it's still a pretty good story
Ikr this had so much potential could been in my top 10
This story got messy. It was very clear with interesting characters up until Keith cheated. And then... The uke personality almost completely shifted. The few following chapter didn't make sense and felt... edited?
I don't know if you guys feel the same way, but that's what I get from the last 10 chapters or so... and it is a shame.
Even, Keith. After that point... Keith's persona kinda jumped all around, but NEVER through a character development. While he didn't have an arc, he had a sort of clear interesting charisma and moral(?) -> Like he was already toxic, but he had also a very clear cut in his personality and was (1) very direct on his opinion and (2) His actions were never random. He was a businessman with (bad, but) standards. That was definitely lost.
After that point as well. a few characters where added to the story, but never fully introduced...? and just... everyone's actions or development just trown out of the window in a very unclear pattern....
I wonder if the author's editing team decided to switch the story, or if the author got interrupted or someone intervened in their writing... bc something that made this story above others and very good was lost on the way...
This had so much potential.